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About Me Member General Fiction Writer wintertiger23/Male/Canada Recent Activity Deviant for 2 Years
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So many stories, so little time.

Sat Mar 29, 2008, 2:25 PM
Lunaforte Granz. A four part science fiction thriller that I've begun to work on. Here's a taste from part one.

Unnatural selection.

“How long have you been planning this little escapade?”
“Months, years. Probably from the moment I realized I could waltz into people's minds and take whatever I wanted.” After all. He whispered into her mind. Genetech Industries gave me the power. It only seems right that I should use it.
“You can't do this.”
“I can't do this!” He roared, lifting her into the air with a thought. “Did you ever consider for a moment that there were people on the receiving end of your little tests?” Tears had begun running freely down his face. “Every scream of horror, every cry of agony. I felt them as if they were my own!” He pushed those thoughts, those feelings into her mind. “Feel for even a moment a glimpse of their pain, and know why I would use my power to grant them freedom.”
It was a world of darkness without form. Adrift in an endless sea of agony the nameless thoughts and feelings of a thousand different voices assaulted her. Each one clinging to her, desperate to find some island of sanity in an ocean of madness, desperate enough even, to drag her down along with them. So that they wouldn't have to go alone.
Rasler had comforted them in such moments, taking from them their fears. And in return weaving for them dreams of something other than pain. So that they would not go screaming into that dark night.
Though it lasted for but a moment, it felt as if an eternity had passed. When she finally caught her breath enough to open her eyes she said. “You're insane.”
Rasler simply looked at her as if she had touched upon a very real truth. “In a world that has gone mad.” He said softly. “Sanity is overrated anyway.”

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